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Monday, August 31, 2020

Make someone smile by writing a good comment.


W.A.L.T write a good comment that makes others feel good.

first we made a draft comment. Then we used our planning document to create our plan. We did this in pairs. My parther was Zyah. 

While making the plan we used shapes and images. Then we used comix to create our comic plan shaped our work.

I really liked how you could add lots of of things to the comic. it was cool that you could choose funny people. the hard bit we sizing the shapes. you should have a go with comic.

Thanks for reading my blog post. What type of post could you leave a great comment on?

3 comments:

  1. Kia ora Jasmine,
    I really enjoyed the part when The girl says "I am going to look at another blog". You taught me that being nice and making a good comment makes somebody's day! How come in the first 3 shots it has a white thingy by the cactus and the next shots it is not there! How long did this take to make?
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    Lila🐹

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  2. kia ora Jasmine
    i liked the how you planed first what the characters were gonna say so you new what to do this showed me that you make someones day when you post a nice comment on someones blog maybe you could add some more detail into it
    from:sophie

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  3. Hi Jasmine I like your post and my school are doing it to and I love your comix

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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.

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