The Hairy Monster Under my Bed
This is my story that I made. It took me 2 days to do it and I hope you like it and commit if you think I need more work on it!!
And My success criteria is I used a descriptive kupu and I had to edit my writing as wail.What I enjoyed was making the storyboard and what I find challenging was to think of the rest of the story.
No one believes me. They think I'm lying. But it's true there's a big hairy monster living under my bed. and I can prove it. I can feel my bed moving and I could hear claws scratching on my floor. When I heard the scratching on my floor I was scared like a cat. When the light Went out I cried. But my mum didn't hear me so I went under my Covers And screamed. then my mum heard me she ran into my room And when my mum came into my room the monster was gone and I told my mum all about it. She didn't believe me. She said “it is just a dream” I said “can you leave the lights on please” When my mum left the room the monster came out of my bed and it was a singly monster. Whenever I was sad or scared the monster would come out and snugly me or make me Laugh.
Thank you for reading. did you like my story???
kia ora jazz I love your story my favorite part was wen you said you were scared like a cat.
ReplyDeletenext time you could add some more information